Poet Quest 7

Inspiration

Can you think of a time in the past you felt alone? How did you exit that loneliness? Is there an image in your mind that gave you hope? Did your hope end up being your saving grace? Go deeper.

Knowledge

Enjambment - Running a sentence into the next line without using punctuation.

End-stopped Lines - Ending each sentence at the end of the line.

It’s important to know when to use enjambment. You can get the opposite effect from enjambment.

On the one hand, you can read a section of poetry fast, creating a sense of panic and urgency.

You can also get the opposite effect by reading slowly, breaking up a sentence into many distinct pauses at the end of each line.

In either case, it creates tension.

Encouragement

Time to bring some tension to your art! Have fun with those intense moments of your past! Try to make the reader feel what you felt. You up for the challenge? I think so!

Challenge

Write a single poem using enjambment to convey how you felt in a past moment in time.

Part 1. First write the story. Then, create the line length to give the wanted effect.

Were you in a panic? Short of breath? Try short, followed by shorter, rhythmic lines that echo someone gasping for air.

Were you stressed out of your mind? Your heart racing? Try shorter lines followed by slightly less short lines.

Were you talking to someone with memory loss? End each long line as if the person speaking trails off in thought before returning to what mattered to them. End the next line with a short punchline.

Part 2. Read it out loud. Then edit what you have to make each line end with the right word and beat that conveys what you want the reader to know and feel.

Then, if you’re up for it, share your favorite (of the two poems you wrote) in the comments or send it to me via carrier pigeon (e-mail) here for feedback.

Matt Antis

Matt Antis creates online as a freelance writer and novelist who formerly lived as a serial small-business entrepreneur. His life’s goal is to share knowledge, encourage, and challenge others through a coach-student relationship.

An unexpected deployment with the Army in 2009 halted his scholastic achievement, but! He learned the bulk of business in the proverbial trench elbow to elbow with a team of professionals who he is forever grateful for.

When he’s not being a husband, dad, shooting his bow or training parkour, you can find him teaching Sunday school, advising parkour gyms, writing for inkjotkingdom.com and his wife’s children’s book website, whitneyantis.com.

https://inkjotkingdom.com
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